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Being that it's my biz....

Production is pretty rough although that's an easy fix.
Not to crazy about the beginning.
Def need ambiant noise or music or something in the intro.

I like the end. Catchy. Get's the point across.
 

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Very cool, thats exactly what I am looking for....My friend just graduated from film school and this is his first "real film" I guess you could say. I thought the beginning look a little youtubish myself but he is still developing his craft.
 

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If I turn the volume up I can hear the background SFX but I think it can be turned up more.

Maybe a clock ticking or something.
It does come across as a student film in the intro.
 

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If I turn the volume up I can hear the background SFX but I think it can be turned up more.

Maybe a clock ticking or something.
It does come across as a student film in the intro.
It does feel a bit amateur. The clock ticking or some other ambient noise would be a good idea.
 

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Not to take away from OP but I saw this this morning....


lol's.
 
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