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08-31-2011, 06:38 PM #11
Awful.
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08-31-2011, 11:36 PM #12
You need a better beat, for one this song will never be a club banger. Not trying to be a dick just honest. Also the chorus you cant really hear much, it sounds too dull. Need more emotion in that persons words. The main person has a unique voice but it may not appeal to many people.
Try out some more beats, maybe change up the whole song considering lil wayne has a song lights camera action. You shud strive to be original!
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09-01-2011, 12:16 AM #13
Barbs, a man of getting people BIG.
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09-01-2011, 03:27 AM #14
Not feel'in it. Tell Scott to call his mother. She was a customer of mine and said he never calls her lol
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09-03-2011, 07:35 PM #15
song sounds redundant as fuUuuuHH
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09-06-2011, 10:41 PM #16
I'm bearish on this one...
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