Thread: Poem I wrote

Internally

As I walk among the wooden floors with a cold shiver,
The emotions are not the same, as my heart pumps with worries.
Anxiety and fear drill thru the tunnels of these veins,
Stalled mentally with a loss for words.
I enter the bathroom then glance at the open window, the cold winds glide across my chest
And aggresively escape off the skin of my upper torso.
Im cold, but i feel as if the chilled winds find entrance to my heart building tenze emotions.
I get undressed, then proceed to let turn the faucet....the knobs are cold too.
I sit myself in the tub and shut my eyes, feeling as if im going to cry but,
The only liquid running across my cheeks,Are the waters which beat against my face exiting the holes of the shower head....
the water pressure is low.
My tears are held in the tissues of my eye socket.
There is no clear explaination to clarify this sudden depression.
It's been like this for a couple of days, I was told that happiness was on the way.
Yet, I carry a burden of considerable pain.
Why dont these tears just leave?
I think it's stuck, no...that's not it.
Im shedding tears internally.

Dawg, that's mad serious deep sea dwelling right there. . .

i think a lot of use to or still do take the ink the pad, and it's the best way to have your soul communicate w/ your subconscious

Damn! I can relate to that. Just got out of a 5 year. Aint depression a bitch? It does get better though, that is for sure.

Wow. You really brought me in.

Great work dude, keep posting!!!

We are all people and have feelings that we sometimes forget...

I like, the last line hooked me; though I don't find comfort in darkness to fully appreciate the rest. Very brave of you to share, thank you.

Originally Posted by Anthony

Damn! I can relate to that. Just got out of a 5 year. Aint depression a bitch? It does get better though, that is for sure.

Anthony we need to talk.....you should come over tomorrow night

Glad evryone loved it, best way to illustrate emotions.

made my arm hairs stand up. Chilling but I could see myself while reading this. thanks